Tiny Red Bus

by gynemeth78 • Uploaded: Jul. 24 '09
Gallerized Jul. '09 123a1acd314ae2de5b89f88143ad6000.png

Description: Childrens Publisher

Status: Client work

Commenting: Not seeking critique

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cobaltcow said on Jul. 24 '09

very nice mark. just a few suggestions..

1. drop the outer glow from the bus - keep it nice and sharp
2. drop the curl from the R. At a glance I keep reading tiny REED bus.

Type08 said on Jul. 24 '09

Uber cute!

gyui said on Jul. 24 '09

^agree with everyone cobaltcow said. also "books" seems out of place with all the other playful elements going on.

myco said on Jul. 24 '09

Adorable! I agree with cobalt cow's comments as well...

cseven said on Jul. 24 '09

Love it. Ditto to cobaltcow's points.

andreiu said on Jul. 25 '09


nexqunyx said on Jul. 25 '09

Yes I agree with the curl on the "R". At quick glance one could mistakenly read it as "Reed". Also "books" looks really lost in the overall design. Needs tweaking but otherwise- SUPER!

JohnM said on Jul. 25 '09


esotericsean said on Jul. 26 '09

Definitely agree. Keep it simple. No outer glow and too many curls.

lboi said on Jul. 26 '09

I love it. It is perfect!!

McGuire Design said on Aug. 01 '09

I love this one, keep it as is it looks great.

Petro said on Sep. 06 '09

Egree with cobaltcow. But it looks very nice ;-)

Momentummagazine said on Oct. 31 '09

Reed here also.

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