The Pier Shops

by randyheil • Uploaded: Mar. 04 '09

Description: A logo for an Atlantic City shopping mall.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: beachpierumbrella

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cerise said on Mar. 06 '09

I like this heaps but I feel it's a little unbalanced. Perhaps smaller text might help

Paul Rand said on Mar. 08 '09

the middle umbrella is not needed, take it out.
use the outside two and ground it with something like the post that holds it.
angle them for interest. maybe add two chairs.
make "THE" smaller and tuck it somewhere.

logoboom said on Mar. 09 '09

Very nice graphic. I don't know how it will feel with only 2. It's nice regardless.

theartistt said on Mar. 09 '09

I think it is perfect just the way it is.

gustavocadar said on Mar. 27 '09


dbunk said on Jun. 19 '09

like the mark, agree with cerise on the type

kugelis said on Mar. 31 '11

the idea is great, I can almost feel the rain drops and the warm cozy feeling under those umbrellas

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