RJR

by jsae • Uploaded: Dec. 28 '08

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Kode Dec. 28 '08

Nice mark!**This is just a suggestion, have you tried using more variations in the color to make the letters more readable? You could use the green on the left for the %22First R %26 J%22 and the green on the right for the %22Last R%22!**IMO, I don't think you need transparency or the color fading effect!

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THEArtistT Dec. 28 '08

I agree that there should be a little more color variation from letter to letter. Love the mark otherwise.

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Kode Dec. 29 '08

I just realized I made a mistake on my previous comment.*%22_You could use the green on the left for the %22First R %26 J%22 and the green on the right for the %22Last R%22!_%22**What I meant was:**%22_You could use the green on the left for the %22First R %26 Last R%22 and the green on the right for the %22J%22!_**That way you get more readability and only use two colors!

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jsae Dec. 29 '08

thank you both, i'll take a look at the colors...*and i had originally tried with solids --i just couldn't get two colors to work for some reason. i used the transparency to lead you eye through the mark*

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Kode Dec. 29 '08

Looking good bro!**The type is a bit small, but I'm sure if you need to enlarge it, you'll be able to do that at will.**Overall, it's a nice solution!

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