The S in the negative space seems a little too big compared to the rest of the type...I think the fish could be reduced a little too so if you just scaled the two of them it might even thing out a bit.%0D*%0D*Excellent illustration.%0D*%0D*Are gold fish edible?
I opened up your portfolio and said %22wow%22.*This one caught my eye instantly.*The fish illustration is stylized nicely and using them to create the S in the negative space works well. I wanted to lower the top part of the S though, slightly.*The type is clean along with the orange color.
i think the fish are too detailed and the connection to a letter S isnt strong enough for this to be considered successful.*the name implies that it will be used on signage after all, and thus should be readable even out of the corner of one's eye. I also am not crazy about the idea of eating goldfish. That said this is still a great illustration and concept just needs to be solidified and made more clear. in short its a great start to what could be a great logo.
I love the use of the gold colour here and I think you have captured the movement of the fish perfectly. It could use a little more work to make it clearer that it is a letter S but as this point has already been raised all I can say is very well done.
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interesting .... the s may need a little bit more definition .... but love it *
ReplyThe S in the negative space seems a little too big compared to the rest of the type...I think the fish could be reduced a little too so if you just scaled the two of them it might even thing out a bit.%0D*%0D*Excellent illustration.%0D*%0D*Are gold fish edible?
ReplyWell done, I think it is inspired from Serene logo, that was created ‘s’ using spoon
ReplyIt's true, I hacked smartinup's computer.
ReplyLove the fish!
ReplyI agree with all these comments. Congrats on the gallery spot, mate!
ReplyReally artistic, maybe you can use a dark color of %22USHI%22 instead a light. Congratulations!!
Replyfantastic!
Replyfully agree to all the positive comments.... respect
ReplyI love however the fish should be a tab bit smaller
ReplyAmazing stuff, this is a fav
Replymuy bien.........
Replyno connection between S and USHI
Replyreally nice one :)
ReplyHaha, I love this concept. Maybe cause I love sushi :P but I love the fish. They are very pretty %3D)
ReplyI love the swirling shapes of the fish!
Replyawesome man, i just read sushi, then saw the first comment and realized...
Replysick man..i agree that the 'S' could be more prominent but that was only after i read the first comment. i got it right away...
ReplyVery nice achieved. Liked a lot!
Replyawesome !!!!!!!!!!!
Replyvery soft... i like it %3B)
ReplyThis really caught my eye.**I think the fish could be the %22S%22...
ReplyI opened up your portfolio and said %22wow%22.*This one caught my eye instantly.*The fish illustration is stylized nicely and using them to create the S in the negative space works well. I wanted to lower the top part of the S though, slightly.*The type is clean along with the orange color.
ReplyI read is as Sushi before i even realized the trick. Awesome!
Replyi think the fish are too detailed and the connection to a letter S isnt strong enough for this to be considered successful.*the name implies that it will be used on signage after all, and thus should be readable even out of the corner of one's eye. I also am not crazy about the idea of eating goldfish. That said this is still a great illustration and concept just needs to be solidified and made more clear. in short its a great start to what could be a great logo.
ReplyI love the use of the gold colour here and I think you have captured the movement of the fish perfectly. It could use a little more work to make it clearer that it is a letter S but as this point has already been raised all I can say is very well done.
ReplyI think the idea is great but like it has already been noted I think the fish are too prominent
Replyeeek...when I think of sushi the last fish I want to see is Koi
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ReplyInteresting design of the logo and graphical realization of!
Replyreally good concept ... very nice illi !
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