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That's some pretty sexy type you've got going there... Wonder if the line breaks are necessary?

Thanks Michael! I was worried it would read %22Ay%22 instead of %22Fly%22.

I agree with Michael. Really sexy type and great movement, but the line breaks are throwing this off. I think you'd only need to do minimal tweaks to this to balance everything out. Rather than 2 even width red strokes showing the overlap, how about tapered, triangular-shaped, shadow-like red areas beneath the overlapping lines? For example, where the top arm of the F overlaps the L, this shadow-like area would start thin on the left side of the L, and would widen to the right side of the L. Same goes for the swashed descender of the F, except that I would allow the swash to overlap (rather than recede behind) itself. Hope this makes sense. It's kind of hard to describe suggestions like these in text.

That totally makes sense. Thanks for the feedback!**I'll give it a try one of these days :)