Sunnyday

by gabilungu • Uploaded: Jan. 11 '08

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firebrand Jan. 11 '08

A sunny day, now that would be nice! I'd be wary of the n's looking like 'm's.

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OcularInk Jan. 11 '08

This is nice. I agree with the others though. There's some legibility issues. Also, the red is a little too intense. How about a nice pale orange. Or something like that. One other thing. You might want to consider removing the dot inside the sun. I'm seeing the Target logo (once again :-P ). By removing the dot, you won't have that problem. With a few quick tweaks, this will be right on. :-)

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