by forty26 • Uploaded: Feb. 07 '08 - Gallerized: Feb. '08
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Comp 2 for online candle retailer
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This feels like one of the stronger concepts to me. However, the home image in the background feels too generic to work. Maybe you can stylize it a little more to give it a fresh look. Just a thought. The other concepts are great too. Have you tried playing off a chimney? That shape also lends itself to resemble a candle. I dunno...just rambling. Keep up the good work.
ReplyThis is my favorite out of the 3. Very nice!
ReplyI really like the simplicity and clean lines of this concept. I do think that %22of%22 needs to be bumped up in size or weight a bit too work well with the other text.
ReplyI'd also try making the flame more upright in orientation. Otherwise, quite lovely!
ReplyI don't like the door handle being there. It seems to add tension to a mostly elegant and clean design.
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Replygreat :D
Reply* Great job
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