Redemption House
by eternalw • Uploaded: Apr. 18 '08
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Final Version of this Logo. It's for a non profit that helps women who have been incarcerated, by giving them a home, helping them get educated, get educated and find jobs to eventually get thier ownn home and merge back into thier communities.
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Personally, I just think there's too much going on in this logo - you really don't know where to look first - there's no natural flow for your eye to follow. And the mixing of different styles is really off-putting (ie, the distressed circle and cross juxtaposed to the sharpness of the house peaks and the sans-serif font) - it's just not working for me. Finally, the addition of the butterfly just feels very random. Sorry.
ReplyI see what you're trying to capture here.. the butterfly%3Dfreedom and new life, the Cross%3Dredemption, yet agree that there is so much going on in the logo. Perhaps there is a way to reduce?
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