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I love the bird illustration, however I am not liking the curve on the font. It seems a tad distracting.

I agree with Bart.

i agree with alto.

I agree with nido.

I agree with Firebrand.

I agree with admarcbart.

I agree with Raja... it's the m that seems most awkward to me.

I agree with admarcbart, alto, nido, firebrand, admarcbart, raja, and ryantoyota. And I agree with Bambini too...whoever that is.

I pray no one ever forgets the GREAT BAMBINO, oh wait, wrong website.

Seriously though. I think if you went with a nice slab serif typeface, it will be great. Has that retro 1950's almost feel.

thanks for everyones input! maybe your right bart, the thing i like most about it is the bird, not so much the text...

Well, it's a good font in that it communicates it's for children very well, but it just has a few distracting elements. Like I said, the m is what's distracting me the most. It just seems too drawn out, and happens right at the curve or transition point in the text, so it makes you pause when you read it, causing a break in the flow.

Ryan has avery good point, I think this is the area of the copy that is hanging me up. I still think a nice slab serif typeface would look great.

Would you please try a slab serif already so Bart will shut up. :-P

@ Oc, Im shutting up.

I don't agree.