I really like the concept and the hat. But the type is ... uhm... ugly. The font sizes are too close. Either make them the same size or more obvious different size. I'm not even sure you need the red. How about a nice grey? Very English.**What's the logo for? Translations? Tee? Just Curious...**I think the type needs some work but other than that I like it.
I think you might need a ligature of the lowercase g descender so you don't have that huge gap between the two lines. If you look, the lower part of the g could make a nice bowl for the P. Color break might not work.
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I really like the concept and the hat. But the type is ... uhm... ugly. The font sizes are too close. Either make them the same size or more obvious different size. I'm not even sure you need the red. How about a nice grey? Very English.**What's the logo for? Translations? Tee? Just Curious...**I think the type needs some work but other than that I like it.
ReplyI think you might need a ligature of the lowercase g descender so you don't have that huge gap between the two lines. If you look, the lower part of the g could make a nice bowl for the P. Color break might not work.
ReplyI like LoGoBoom's idea to connect the lowercase 'g' with the 'P' in 'EXPERT'. That could work out nice and make this much more interesting.
Reply%5E I agree with guys, but nice execution of the hat...
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