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I really like the glass illustration. Maybe the type is a little bit 'too' art deco. and the italic font don't match with it. Maybe you can look for a more traditional font? success!

i agree with cjiske, but the symbol is beautifull!

I like this as is. Nice work Dale. The spiral cuts within the wine glass really help convey the trail idea. The colors are lovely as well. Kudos, dude!!

Beautiful design and illustration. Overall composition needs some experimentation.

Its not centered very well. The emblem is the best part. But all I read was Vine Ventage. Actually, at first I read Vine Village for some reason. And trail looks like 'lrail'.

I mean I just read 'Vine Vintage'.

Forget that last post. I didn't know you could edit the post. Anyway, what I actually meant to say was... It's not centered. All I read was Vine Vintage and trail looks like 'lrail'. Other than that it's great, the emblem is the best part, maybe you can use more of it somehow.

There's definitely something appealing about the way the swooshes cut across the top of the glass. I like using shades of wine colors as well.%0D*%0D*What first jumped out at me (besides the text needing work, as others mentioned) was that the the pieces on the bottom seem too small. You might break the stem into two pieces, but even making it one solid piece looks cleaner i.m.o.:%0D*%0D*%3Ca href%3D%22http://metaeducation.com/logopond/v2v_2.png%22%3Ev2v_2.png%3C/a%3E%0D*%0D*Doing so might be able to put some meaning onto your swooshes: they might be an abstract representation of how wine is spilling down and pouring into the glass! It's not quite there right now, but it could get there with tweaking. (OcularInk suggested above that the cuts were evoking imagery of a trail cut into the glass, but that really doesn't jump out at me here...)%0D*%0D*Also on a simplification note, I think this is a real case where calling it %22vine to vintage trail%22 is too many words. Editing it down to %22Vine to Vintage%22 is better, and if you really have to add more detail about what it is you can put it in the context... not the logotype.%0D*%0D*Regards,%0D*met%26aelig%3Bducation

That wine glass is awesome.

**LOVE THIS!!