Apr. 04 '08
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Ukrainian Jewish Committee
very nice. I think the outside of the stroke could follow the dove where it creates those 2 star points.
Excellent work. Slight clash with the T's tho.
Gorgeous! *Maybe try making the bottom right star point into the dove's tail as well? So 3 of the points are rectilinear and 3 are more organic.*I also like the left justification of the type - very fitting and evocative of the Hebrew language. However, the typography is a bit too tight. I'd try to track it out to let it breathe more, or better yet trying out a more modern (sans-serif ?) font given the modern nature of the mark....
Love it!! n_n
I'm going to Odessa in August. Will I see this some where?*
Very original concept and well executed.
nice mark, lovely
%22I think the outside of the stroke could follow the dove where it creates those 2 star points.%22**plus 1 %3E This step is needed to reach perfection. Great concept!
That mark is gorgeous. Agree with making the bottom right star point into the dove's tail as well :)
While the concept itself isnt really original, its execution is quite good.**!http://www.judaica2000.com/14K_peace_dove_cut2_small1.jpg!*
grand idea, well done!
definitely well executed (to be repetitive)
its to the left of my text...
i can see anything..only black block..is i missed something..
It's great to be able to see this one again.
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