Ukrainian Jewish Committee

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KGB Apr. 04 '08

very nice. I think the outside of the stroke could follow the dove where it creates those 2 star points.

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firebrand Apr. 04 '08

Excellent work. Slight clash with the T's tho.

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gypseemoth Apr. 04 '08

Gorgeous! *Maybe try making the bottom right star point into the dove's tail as well? So 3 of the points are rectilinear and 3 are more organic.*I also like the left justification of the type - very fitting and evocative of the Hebrew language. However, the typography is a bit too tight. I'd try to track it out to let it breathe more, or better yet trying out a more modern (sans-serif ?) font given the modern nature of the mark....

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straycloud Apr. 04 '08

I'm going to Odessa in August. Will I see this some where?*

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gthobbs Apr. 05 '08

Very original concept and well executed.

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Respiro Apr. 06 '08

%22I think the outside of the stroke could follow the dove where it creates those 2 star points.%22**plus 1 %3E This step is needed to reach perfection. Great concept!

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SpencerLavery Apr. 07 '08

That mark is gorgeous. Agree with making the bottom right star point into the dove's tail as well :)

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dache Apr. 07 '08

While the concept itself isnt really original, its execution is quite good.**!http://www.judaica2000.com/14K_peace_dove_cut2_small1.jpg!*

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solomon11211 Apr. 07 '08

grand idea, well done!

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onesummer Apr. 08 '08

definitely well executed (to be repetitive)

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nido Mar. 19 '09

its to the left of my text...

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43labs Dec. 08 '09

i can see anything..only black block..is i missed something..

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fogra Dec. 15 '09

It's great to be able to see this one again.

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