Leonard's Unlimited

by bigshift • Uploaded: Jul. 10 '09

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Description: The Client was adamant about keeping the 'Leonard's' script, the grass, hill, and 'sun'. This is what I came up with, working within those parameters. Looking for critiques etc.
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MomentumMagazine Jul. 10 '09

I would switch the location of RETAINING WALLS and WATER FEATURES because there is more space up top for it. I don't know if it's because it's small and I cant see, but it looks like the tree is sticking out of the inner circle only a little. If you want it sticking out, make it more obvious so that it doesn't look like a mistake that it's out. Maybe a dot between the inside text to separate them to make it easier on the eye. I love the colors of the design though!

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bigshift Jul. 10 '09

Thanks MomentumMag... yeah I need to better space the %22competency's%22. Def. will fix the tree... it was meant to break the plane... but.. takes up too much space to do effectively so I need to clean it up.

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