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Please guys can you tell me what you think? I need the feedback before I present this to the client.

Thank you.

Its a tablecloth, and I thought in negative space it enhances the volume. I don't know maybe I'm totally off with this :)

What about the variant?

It looks pretty in general, but both of the variants look like Packmans to me) May be the problem is in the cloth.. It's not recognizable at all..

I have reversed the negative space, please check out variant 2 and tell me what you think. I retained the P letter that way and I think the tablecloth is more evident now.

Sorry about the boring grey color but its the new webpage design color that will be used on the webpage and I can not change that background color. :)

Good idea about the whine and corners I will try it out. What do you think if I would add a color to the letter to bring it out a bit?

@liandr yup I think variant 1 (the one with the circle) does look like pacman :))

Updated the variant

Thank you all for your feedback it is very helpful to receive feedback from another viewer.