The Jane Hotel
by baskervillain • Uploaded: Sep. 20 '09
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Student work, redesign for The Jane Hotel in NYC. Would really appreciate any feedback, very interested in constructive criticism. Thanks!
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I like the idea behind it, but try executing it differently? For example, the font you used for %22Hotel%22 doesn't mash well with the rest of it. Also, try an even more flourish-y font for %22The Jane%22, that's a little more rounded like how the other side of the key looks...
ReplyThanks for the advice, I shall post the revision.
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