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wouldn't be better if the mark ended on the circle? great job.

The text is hard to read that thin and the center with the balloon seems way crowded. If you brought the height of your text down that would make it more readable and give you a little more room to let the center breath. I like it.

I like how you did the wax

there are some spacing issues with the bottom of the balloon. seems sort of cramped. repeating the name is a bit odd as well, i follow the words around and then try and look at the center image in a similar fashion, which doesn't work either. when in doubt, but it in a circle/wax i guess.**what if the balloon, also acted as a globe, and the buckets doubled as indicators on a rose? i dunno, some ideas maybe.

It's a nice t shirt mark, but it's not a great logo because it cant reduce well with that particular typeface. I'd suggest thickening up the typeface a bit to read thicker than the illustration.

%5E To whom it may concern, I'm sure Bart is aware of these issues and probably just uploaded it temporarily. This guy has so much respect from me as a designer. He does Impeccable clean work and I am a big fan of BartBarts work.