I personally think this would work better without the flames coming off the side. Overall though i really like this, the angle is great and the design is simple and effective.
I like the composition - I'd advise you to revisit your flames - they get a bit 'clumpy' - less flame-like - at about the half-way mark in each flame element - needs/wants to be a bit more 'flow-y' - very eye-catching - I'd love to work with the flaming ipod of art!
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I personally think this would work better without the flames coming off the side. Overall though i really like this, the angle is great and the design is simple and effective.
ReplyI like the composition - I'd advise you to revisit your flames - they get a bit 'clumpy' - less flame-like - at about the half-way mark in each flame element - needs/wants to be a bit more 'flow-y' - very eye-catching - I'd love to work with the flaming ipod of art!
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