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by apsaracreative • Uploaded: Jun. 29 '09

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Description: Ethnography research and reports. Unused comp.
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ajgagnon Jun. 29 '09

The concept it great! I think it just needs some cleaning up and a little TLC. I would omit the small lines on the shovel as well as square off parts of the shovel so the f and t look less distorted. Can't wait to see the final!

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MomentumMagazine Jun. 29 '09

%5ENice suggestions. I agree. Looking forward to seeing it also. Good luck. Love the use of negative space.

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apsaracreative Jun. 30 '09

Thanks for the comments guys. I spent a few hours fine tuning and I think it's closer.

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