Aug. 20 '10
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a stylised S mark for a handicrafts store
real celtic twist on the mark, very much like it. well done. kerning to tight on logotype, loosen it up a tad.
Thanks Alex,Paul!*Kerning adjusted.
Not sure I love the upper case As with the lower case y, but the mark is exquisite!
Very nice, Shyam :)
Very stylish and elegant. Even after your first update, I have the feeling tracking remains too tight...
I can't help it. I feel terrible, but this is me critiquing. It's pretty. It's elegant, love the colors... but it has the silhouette of a maxi-pad.
Come to think of it I see an infinity symbol rotated clockwise. Anyways its all about different perspectives and I totally respect it :)*Thanks a lot guys for all your comments and feedback.Much appreciated.
Ni looking. Good work
Love the mark, and the subtle gradient you did on it. Although I think considering the variable width typeface you chose, maybe the mark could benefit from a little variating widths? Just an opinion there.**As for the type, overall I find it a bit disturbing. After that stylish highnote that the mark leaves me with, the type brings me to a screeching halt. It's a shame, because this has the potential to be really amazing. I think one of the things you could change to really amp it up is to manually edit the angle of the y (the left arm of it, make it slightly more vertical so that it's parallel with the A beside it.)
The type is kerned a little too tight for my taste, but overall great job!
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