Saaya

by almosh82 • Uploaded: Aug. 20 '10 - Gallerized: Aug. '10

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Description: a stylised S mark for a handicrafts store
Status: Client work
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mcdseven Aug. 21 '10

real celtic twist on the mark, very much like it. well done. kerning to tight on logotype, loosen it up a tad.

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almosh82 Aug. 22 '10

Thanks Alex,Paul!*Kerning adjusted.

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lumavine Aug. 23 '10

Not sure I love the upper case As with the lower case y, but the mark is exquisite!

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vernics Aug. 23 '10

Very nice, Shyam :)

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thomas Aug. 25 '10

Very stylish and elegant. Even after your first update, I have the feeling tracking remains too tight...

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Pidgey Aug. 26 '10

I can't help it. I feel terrible, but this is me critiquing. It's pretty. It's elegant, love the colors... but it has the silhouette of a maxi-pad.

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almosh82 Aug. 27 '10

Come to think of it I see an infinity symbol rotated clockwise. Anyways its all about different perspectives and I totally respect it :)*Thanks a lot guys for all your comments and feedback.Much appreciated.

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altwebmedia Aug. 28 '10

Ni looking. Good work

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ashmenon Aug. 28 '10

Love the mark, and the subtle gradient you did on it. Although I think considering the variable width typeface you chose, maybe the mark could benefit from a little variating widths? Just an opinion there.**As for the type, overall I find it a bit disturbing. After that stylish highnote that the mark leaves me with, the type brings me to a screeching halt. It's a shame, because this has the potential to be really amazing. I think one of the things you could change to really amp it up is to manually edit the angle of the y (the left arm of it, make it slightly more vertical so that it's parallel with the A beside it.)

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lukeskybaker Sep. 08 '10

The type is kerned a little too tight for my taste, but overall great job!

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