francis manor (revised)

by achoo819 • Uploaded: May. 29 '07 - Gallerized: Jun. '07

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Description: logo design for francis manor, an exquisite three story condominium residence, located in downtown, LA ---the theme is nature and forest
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Darrel May. 29 '07

perhaps a bit trendy, but the mark is well executed.**I'm not sold on the type though. Maybe drop the copperplate and go with a more modern sans. Also, I don't think the letterspacing is helping and would work just fine without it.

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Craven91 May. 29 '07

The branches in the trees make me think there are possibilities to maybe make them into represenations of the %22three-story condos%22 or the people living in the condos.%0D*%0D*Maybe the trees are designed with a perspective of the viewer looking up at them - similiar to a three story building?%0D*%0D*My point being, the base elements seem to be here. Now you need to tweak them to give it the unique feel that says %22francis manor.%22

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OcularInk May. 29 '07

I agree with Darrel about the type. Drop the copperplate! Also, the mark is a bit overpowering. Try reducing its size and maybe use lighter colors. All in all, nice job.

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kaimere May. 29 '07

agreed on type but loving the mark ...

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achoo819 May. 30 '07

hey guys, thanx for the comments!guess i need to play around with the type

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illusio Sep. 22 '08

Take away one of the trees

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