TrendParket

by TSovo • Uploaded: Feb. 29 '12 - Gallerized: Mar. '12

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Add to Pad (In 7 Pad s )

Description: Floor retailers. Client work.
Status: Work in progress
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Type and Signs Mar. 01 '12

very nice type work ... great hand !!

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t-sovo Mar. 01 '12

Thank you Mr. Type and Signs!

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lumavine Mar. 01 '12

Nice work. The color contrast here is making it a bit hard to see, maybe go a bit brighter and less textured. My eye hesitates at the space between the F of flooring and the script to it's left. My gut says that space should be at least as large as the space between the subtitle letters. Lastly, the O in flooring is interacting with the descender in an awkward way. Maybe a bit more leading is in order? Or also tightening up the tracking on the subtitle and giving it its own defined block separated from the rest.

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t-sovo Mar. 01 '12

thanks luma for the extensive comment here. did some changes to it. hopefully to your liking :D

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lumavine Mar. 02 '12

Really nice update!

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t-sovo Mar. 02 '12

thanks luma, appreciate the words.

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