Nov. 04 '09
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Logo done for a friend of mine. He is a web designer, I've created a mouse using his initials. wip, feedback appreciated. Criticism welcome!
Lucky friend. Ditch the outline or reduce some. Big kudos.
Thank you logomotive, means alot %3D) *My thought with the outline was a mousepad.. Think it should be reduced?
Welcome, at least reduce the outline to the same as the type. nice choice of type BTW.
Update, Thanks again. *Much better.
I agree ditch the outline, it distracts from the very cool mark/mouse and IMO you really don't need it to identify the mouse. *
Call me crazy, but I like the outline.
This logo changed my life
I'll have to upload one without the outline so you guys can see it. *pjm - I'm glad to have made an impact in your life Lol.*
OK after seeing both now and with reduced outline I'm crazy with Jared. This one.
I like it I guess. The different weight in the H is throwing me off. Maybe I'm not seeing it correctly.
C on outside, H on the inside, I think. I definitely agree with Joe though, you may want to increase the weight of the H so it matches the C. It's easily done.
Thank you much for the criticism. I'll try that out I can definitely see where your coming from with the weight issue now that you mention it.*update soon.*
You know what you could do is make the outline on the right side flat and keep the left side rounded. I think that'd really make the CH pop atcha.
%5E Another good idea.
Now that.... IS HOT.
Updated*Thoughts?*Not sure if this takes away from it or not.
heh, very good idea lundeja thank you so much %3D)
cool. looks like a mouse and now a smiling face with the right side flat. i like it.
Thank you frank ! I appreciate it.
Oh btw, chad.. the outside wasn't meant to be the C but I guess that does work.. If you block out the negative space and look at the mark as a whole (without the outline) it is a C
Definitley better with the above changes made, good work. The mixture of the thin type %26 the bulkiness of the mouse is a good contrast, as was the decision to keep it B%26W. :)
Thank you very much hayes! I do agree, the changes did help this logo out greatly.*Thanks everyone.
nice work! (i also see a :D face in there!)
His middle name wouldn't be 'Ed' by any chance?
No, it is not ed.. Sorry %3D)
A vast improvement over the earlier version.
Thank you very much firebrand, I agree.
clever, simple ellegance, congrat.
Very nice solution.
This is pretty solid. Nice job.
Thanks !mude rincon,imude,ahab.. highly appreciated!
Very nice. I love logos with negative space that DOESN'T pop out like this - more sophisticated because you have to make your mind work a bit to see it. Love to see this refining process on here as well. Great work everyone!
Great job. I feel like some people might not get that it's a mouse- but once you see it, once kind of has a feeling of accomplishment as if they just solved a little puzzle or something. If that makes any sense.
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