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by StephenJames • Uploaded: Nov. 04 '09 - Gallerized: Nov. '09

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Description: Logo done for a friend of mine. He is a web designer, I've created a mouse using his initials. wip, feedback appreciated. Criticism welcome!
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Tags: mouse initals Chris
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logomotive Nov. 04 '09

Lucky friend. Ditch the outline or reduce some. Big kudos.

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

Thank you logomotive, means alot %3D) *My thought with the outline was a mousepad.. Think it should be reduced?

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logomotive Nov. 04 '09

Welcome, at least reduce the outline to the same as the type. nice choice of type BTW.

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

Update, Thanks again. *Much better.

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muse7 Nov. 04 '09

I agree ditch the outline, it distracts from the very cool mark/mouse and IMO you really don't need it to identify the mouse. *

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lundeja Nov. 04 '09

Call me crazy, but I like the outline.

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pjm Nov. 04 '09

This logo changed my life

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

I'll have to upload one without the outline so you guys can see it. *pjm - I'm glad to have made an impact in your life Lol.*

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logomotive Nov. 04 '09

OK after seeing both now and with reduced outline I'm crazy with Jared. This one.

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Momentummagazine Nov. 04 '09

I like it I guess. The different weight in the H is throwing me off. Maybe I'm not seeing it correctly.

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Chad Sanderson Nov. 04 '09

C on outside, H on the inside, I think. I definitely agree with Joe though, you may want to increase the weight of the H so it matches the C. It's easily done.

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

Thank you much for the criticism. I'll try that out I can definitely see where your coming from with the weight issue now that you mention it.*update soon.*

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lundeja Nov. 04 '09

You know what you could do is make the outline on the right side flat and keep the left side rounded. I think that'd really make the CH pop atcha.

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Chad Sanderson Nov. 04 '09

%5E Another good idea.

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lundeja Nov. 04 '09

Now that.... IS HOT.

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

Updated*Thoughts?*Not sure if this takes away from it or not.

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

heh, very good idea lundeja thank you so much %3D)

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mfrank Nov. 04 '09

cool. looks like a mouse and now a smiling face with the right side flat. i like it.

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

Thank you frank ! I appreciate it.

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

Oh btw, chad.. the outside wasn't meant to be the C but I guess that does work.. If you block out the negative space and look at the mark as a whole (without the outline) it is a C

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Hayes Image Nov. 04 '09

Definitley better with the above changes made, good work. The mixture of the thin type %26 the bulkiness of the mouse is a good contrast, as was the decision to keep it B%26W. :)

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Stephen James Nov. 04 '09

Thank you very much hayes! I do agree, the changes did help this logo out greatly.*Thanks everyone.

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eziemac Nov. 04 '09

nice work! (i also see a :D face in there!)

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fogra Nov. 04 '09

His middle name wouldn't be 'Ed' by any chance?

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Stephen James Nov. 05 '09

No, it is not ed.. Sorry %3D)

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firebrand Nov. 05 '09

A vast improvement over the earlier version.

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Stephen James Nov. 05 '09

Thank you very much firebrand, I agree.

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rincon Nov. 05 '09

clever, simple ellegance, congrat.

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!mude Nov. 06 '09

Very nice solution.

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ahab Nov. 06 '09

This is pretty solid. Nice job.

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Stephen James Nov. 07 '09

Thanks !mude rincon,imude,ahab.. highly appreciated!

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pixelauthor Nov. 10 '09

Very nice. I love logos with negative space that DOESN'T pop out like this - more sophisticated because you have to make your mind work a bit to see it. Love to see this refining process on here as well. Great work everyone!

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ryanlynndesign Jan. 14 '10

Great job. I feel like some people might not get that it's a mouse- but once you see it, once kind of has a feeling of accomplishment as if they just solved a little puzzle or something. If that makes any sense.

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