Dec. 09 '13
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I think it's good, at least better than it was before. As for me:
1. I'm not a big fan of strokes, though they are a common thing in sport logos.
2. I also think it could be better to separate the type and the emblem.
3. I love the details you've added to the type, but the mark is more dynamic visually. How about italics? Just my three cents :)
I agree ^^, you get that book yet Nikita?
Hey, David. In average ordinary shipping takes about a month! )
I love the type, but can't help seeing a sea turtle instead of a falcon. Perhaps, since falcons have large eyes, there would be opportunity to focus on the head and use the volleyball within?
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