Mangia Mangia - Pasta Bar

by Raja • Uploaded: Oct. 14 '08


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Description: ID in process for new age eco friendly pasta bar / restaraunt
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raja Oct. 14 '08

I got inspired after seeing this on my desk**!image link!:

sdijock Oct. 14 '08

I think the shape of your noodle needs to look more like the one that raja's holding up in the photo. Your shape is close, but the open end on the left side of the noodle just doesn't look right - I don't think it's necessary to show it. Just draw the noodle with the open end hidden (ie, facing down).**I would also take another look at the way in which you're handling the descender of the %22g%22. It looks like an afterthought.

logomotive Oct. 14 '08

I agree, GREAT concept you have going, just needs to be refined.

GabrielRO Oct. 14 '08

GREAT colors, GREAT concept, GREAT type... but needs some love.

firebrand Oct. 14 '08

You must have had fun drawing this. Reminds me of a water flume at a theme park.

OcularInk Oct. 14 '08

Awesome concept, man!!

tass Mar. 12 '09

i really like the shape, the light and the colors!

raja Apr. 01 '09

rules? what rules? haha

dbunk Apr. 02 '09

%22eco friendly%22 pasta bar / restaurant. To me it looks more like an icon than a logo, its a fine line though. When its Raja there is high expectation, this one doesnt meet up.

raja Sep. 01 '11

sorry to disappoint dbunk!


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