Mar. 01 '10
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here is a test on my mark as a bw. any thoughs? WIP
%5E minimalizing as we write, anthony. :) thanks for the feed back.*i'll re-post when tighter.
UPDATED. less details.
MIke, not sure that the rays of the pencil and the bulbs should be so different in thickness, noted their brown color. You can also simplify - noted in red**http://gyazo.com/90d12e3e2804bae21c8e50879b898989.png
thanks Anthony.*you too Ivan. I had already been working on that before I even got the suggestion.*But I haven't touched the bottom part. Thanks for the quick insight. much appreciated guys.
ANOTHER UPDATE:*Thank, Anthony and Ivan.
This is looking sweet Mike!!
Looking for some hot stuff...
Looks Great!! :D
Hey that's very cool has a great retro feel
looks great Mikey, I actually prefer this to the color for some reason.
this is more like it! it's much better!
I'm so glad you decided to do this version. Looks great and I think everyone's feedback supports that. The only tweak I would consider is playing with the metal portion. The weight of your lines don't quite match up to the rest of the mark. Other than that, kudos! Good luck.
This one is very cool Mikey:)
defo my fav from the bunch Mike!
%5E%5E very nice man
thanks everyone. great feed back and support from some great logo masters. :)
wow this looks great. This is a nit pick but the dark part of the pencil doesn't really work in my opinion, would maybe be better if it was all the one colour?**great work anyway!
Thumbs up from me... if thats worth anything :)
thanks eziemac, i'll take a look. I thought i tried it and it looked kind of flat, but i will take another peak at it.**chopeh, course your comments are worth something, you do some nice stuff. Thanks for taking the time to comment. :)
looks good Mike.
i like the bw version better, very pretty!
Mikey, the dark black parts are really annoying, but like the solidness.
sorry, Mike, but not sure I follow you.
%5E He's pointing out the color difference on pencil.
UPDATED. I turned the pencil white rather than all black. Thanks for the suggestions, I think it helps the pencil stand out more. Thanks for all the nice comments everyone.
Like that a lot better Mikey.
Thanks, Joe. got some great feed back.
Working better now. Nice update.
Love the style. Very nice touch of detail
Hi, excuse me for my english...i knew this page 2 weeks ago approximately, I deposited my personal logo immediately and one person said to me that mi personal logo is like yours... i suppose that it is a coincidence. Well... we had a similar idea!!, but is different. %3B)
I love this!
thank you, feibig. appreciate it.
Strong. Looks like a really well crafted identity which would be great to see used on other marketing materials. Well done.
thank you for the comment, Steven. appreciate it very much.
When I browsed showcases of the designers who are featured on logopond I was surprised that you are not yet there%3B) I hope it happens soon %3B)
Now with the long awaited feature of Sean, I also think that the right following move is Mike.
they save the best for last.
Michal, Stelian and Paul, thanks guys for the comments.*There are quite a few here that deserve feature. Sergey, Michael Spitz, Joe Prince just to name a few, so I am just honored you think my names in there.*But I am glad Sean made it, he's a talented guy. And so are you guys. :D Cheers.
glad you agree David. gotta be tough for ya! But your doing a nice job, sir.
could you post one version without the rays around the lightbulb? it may look better. nice work though
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