Wild Haven Honey _V2
by Mikeymike • Uploaded: May. 13 '11
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Second option on the label logo. changed the type and worked on getting the type to look like its made of honey.
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ReplyThe %22Haven%22 is a tiny bit hard to read, but the logo overall is gorgeous. Nice effect. Maybe have that Y end with a little glistening drop...
Reply%5E I agree, the type overall is great and the effect is very nice but Haven may be a touch hard to read, particularly in the h, a and v. Might look at the area where the H connects to the a and giving more clarity and the area where the a connects to the v. I see Hawen. Great mark though, man!
ReplyLOVE that W!!! Take that and stick it on the other one! And while I do like the honey effect (apart from the rough edges), you've obviously redone the typography completely on this one, where I think it was overall more balanced in the other execution. Readability takes a big hit here, as others have mentioned.
ReplyUPDATED: Hope %22Haven%22 is easier to read.
ReplyBingo!
Replycool! i really like how smooth Haven is now. I'd say make the rest of the mark this smooth, fix some of the scruffies on the 'ld' in Wild, and fix that 'e' in Honey and you're set! great work!
ReplyThanx Sean and Nathan. yeah I think I'm getting closer.
ReplyI love the dots at the end of the 'y'. A case of a small change making a huge difference.
Replythanks Simon. I agree, the simple tweaks sometimes can pay off the biggest rewards.
Replyvery nice mike
ReplyThanks, Florin. working on smoothing out that type a bit, but I think its close to where I want it to be.
Replyvery good lettering !
Replythanks for the comment, Bernd. still working on cleaning this one. cheers.
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