PlanU

by MikeRivers • Uploaded: Aug. 04 '15

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Description: PlanU is an upcoming application whose goal is to unite student activity boards around the country.
Status: Work in progress
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ChineseViking Aug. 05 '15

I know you're not seeking critique, but if it's not too late, I'd suggest increasing the kerning between the "N" and the "U" just a tad more. First several times reading it, I read "Planu."

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ChineseViking Aug. 05 '15

I like the notch that you incorporated into the top of the "A." The whole thing looks very balanced, so I see how adjusting the kerning could create some problems. I was trying to figure out how I'd accentuate the "U" a bit more. Maybe I'd make it a different color or something. But it does look so nice all white.

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MikeRivers Aug. 06 '15

I really appreciate the feedback. Maybe making the"P" and "U' slightly bigger as well as adjusting kerning would help. It would still be balanced but you'd read it more as PlanU instead of Planu.

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ChineseViking Aug. 06 '15

Clever! I bet that would work. :-)

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