Barm Water Park

by Maryam • Uploaded: Jul. 04 '12

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Description: Barm is a farsi name for small lake
As seen on: Barm Water Park
Status: Student work
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Tags: farsi logotype circle blue water park
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1ta Jul. 04 '12

maryam jan vase fontha ehtiaj nist in style ro bedi say kon karhato takht tar besazi darbare bachground behtare tak rang bashe ... movafagh bashi

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THEArtistT Jul. 04 '12

get rid of the outline and the drop shadow for sure. the text is horrendous. your marks are strong, but you need to see how others are doing fonts/text. stick with vector and stop the photoshop tricks. :)

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THEArtistT Jul. 04 '12

get rid of the outline and the drop shadow for sure. the text is horrendous. your marks are strong, but you need to see how others are doing fonts/text. stick with vector and stop the photoshop tricks.

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maryam Jul. 05 '12

thanks for your suggestion

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