This is a nice concept. I'm wondering if it would be more effective by removing the bottom right serif on the left side of the A in the mark? For me, that one serif catches my eye too often. Even so, it's a great logo.
I like the idea but a couple of things are bothering me... it strikes me as backwards. The heavy stroke of an A is always on the right side, not the left. The serif at the bottom of the left side tells me you're going for an actual A, so I'd flip it. Also, I think the serif on the narrow leg should match the serif on the broad leg in some way. The angled inner serif seems out of balance to me. Otherwise, I like the layered papers making the inside of the letter.
I really like the concept, very simple but works well visually. The serif on the inside edge of the A was the first thing I noticed as well, it breaks up the %22stack%22 of paper and loses the effect a bit. Great concept, I think it'll be a beautiful mark with a few minor adjustments.
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This is a nice concept. I'm wondering if it would be more effective by removing the bottom right serif on the left side of the A in the mark? For me, that one serif catches my eye too often. Even so, it's a great logo.
ReplyI like the idea but a couple of things are bothering me... it strikes me as backwards. The heavy stroke of an A is always on the right side, not the left. The serif at the bottom of the left side tells me you're going for an actual A, so I'd flip it. Also, I think the serif on the narrow leg should match the serif on the broad leg in some way. The angled inner serif seems out of balance to me. Otherwise, I like the layered papers making the inside of the letter.
ReplyThanks guys. Good points.
ReplyI really like the concept, very simple but works well visually. The serif on the inside edge of the A was the first thing I noticed as well, it breaks up the %22stack%22 of paper and loses the effect a bit. Great concept, I think it'll be a beautiful mark with a few minor adjustments.
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