Feb. 18 '11
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Photography, Video, and more. WIP. Would appreciate some thoughts on how to improve it, or make it work better. Thanks.
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I like the zebra stripes and the shutter concept with the organic handling and then the contrasting modern typography. But I wonder if there is another solution other than a shutter and wonder if that might be why you haven't got some feedback? I don't know. I think people are tired of shutters here. The name seems contradictory to me. What do they do exactly? Is it just black and white stuff?
Thank you Sean, that's a very nice analysis. I agree on the overused shutter (that's why i didn't strive to make it that clear, mostly insisted on the zebra stripes. About the name. It works in our language, in English it actually means %22Coloured Zebra%22. Again, thank you. Currently brainstorming on other ways to convey media and zebra. I've updated with a colored mark on dark bg.
I actually think that this is brilliant. Wonder how it would look if you add 3rd thin strip on just a few sides, probably inside the shutter, simply to mask it even more and break down that pattern a bit..sweet work!
No prob, Stelian. On the shutter, I think a shutter concept is still a very viable concept, it's just how creatively it's used that is the key and I like what you have done here. I like Srdjan's suggestion too. The color you added here looks nice. Keep pushing, there's bound to be some great things you can do with a Zebra concept!
Will do, Sean. @ Srdjan, thanks for that tip, will definitely give it a try, at the moment focusing on a new concept. again thanks everyone.
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