by Kickholas • Uploaded: Nov. 13 '12


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Description: This is another version that I wanted to post separate as to get the critiques and comparisons of the two.
Status: Student work
Viewed: 416
Tags: #personalogo

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williamtdow Nov. 14 '12

I like this one better than the other one. I feel cleaner and easier to read by just a hair. I like being able to read your last name as easily as your first. Only suggestion I would offer is to raise your first name and lower your last name just a hair. From my point of view they almost bleed into the dividing gray line. Aside from that looks very professional. Well done!

logomotive Nov. 14 '12

Williamtdow, glad you could join us all here at logopond with your critiques.Is this a student project amongst other colleagues??

mallen58 Nov. 14 '12

symmetrical,versatile, precise. and clean. The last name is far easier to read than the first logo. If you wanted continuity with the center gray line and you name. As if you wanted to have your name bleed out of the gray line. This design has achieved that. The readability is a little strained.

vision design and graphics Nov. 15 '12

Yes logomotive these are students among students!


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