by Jonk • Uploaded: Dec. 11 '08
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Logo for "La bière du Bouffay"
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You can't tell what's going on with all that detail in your icon - SIMPLIFY. Also, your type in the smaller ribbon and the type above and below %22Bouffay%22 is almost completely illegible as it's too small. Finally, the inner rule of your shield shape doesn't quite follow the outer rule - which makes it look odd.**The general concept is there, it just needs tweaking. Good luck.
ReplySorry for my english,**Yes I'm agree with your remarks, I'll made two years ago when I was student and now I see these defects well.**Thanks sdijock.
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