Overboard Cocktail Sauce

by JayFletcher • Uploaded: Jan. 05 '09

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Description: Overboard Cocktail Sauce is made in Charleston, South Carolina, using entirely local and fresh ingredients.
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nexqunyx Jan. 05 '09

Nice mark...I love the idea!

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LoGoBoom Jan. 05 '09

Would like to see some color exploration and the kerning is tighter on ERB than the rest of the text. But nice fun mark.

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Kode Jan. 06 '09

I agree with LoGoBoom about the kerning. The shrimp could benefit from a %22Cooked Shrimp%22 shade for a more appetizing effect IMO!

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THEArtistT Jan. 06 '09

Cute. There are kerning issues. But I wouldn't change the color. (Why save a dead shrimp? Sorry Kode.).

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Kode Jan. 06 '09

Hey *Trish*,*About your comment _%22why save a dead shrimp?%22_, not sure this is about saving shrimps even though there is a lifesaver in the logo.**When someone says cocktail sauce I immediately think %22Deliciously Juicy Shrimp%22 but not live or raw!**It doesn't even have to be a %22cooked shrimp shade%22 in fact, any shade with a fresh feel would do, the brown is an earthy tone that doesn't fit the composition!**By the way, no need to be sorry! I think that when designers disagree on something, a healthy debate can provide for creative exploration!

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THEArtistT Jan. 06 '09

You are probably right. My favorite color is brown so I have a tendency to favor it. I can see where, for some, brown would not necessarily elicit good things in the taste department.

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firebrand Jan. 06 '09

Nice flow to the prawn/shrimp coming through the lifesaver. I think you may have gone a bit overboard with the frame around it.

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onesummer Jan. 06 '09

yeah, i'd prefer it with the prawn only%3B or atleast try a differently designed lifesaver. you live in charleston? I'm up in greenville, not too far from ya.

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THEArtistT Jan. 06 '09

But I can see the O in the lifesaver and the prawn makes a lowercase b. The style is consistent throughout. I'd leave the design well enough alone (except for maybe the color%3B you know where I stand on that, however).

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mr. m Jan. 18 '09

I like it a lot. The colors are great. Something about the shrimp's tail is off putting though. Maybe that it comes out so close to the split in the yellow ring?

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