Vonde

by JasonCho • Uploaded: Oct. 02 '08 - Gallerized: Oct. '08

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Description: bird. a basic cover :)
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Tags: swan swan swan swan
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echofactory Oct. 03 '08

Everybody loves swans.

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penflare Oct. 04 '08

yeah i love the shape, great job jason cho!

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logomotive Oct. 05 '08

This is a bit weak IMO.Type is too small,not enough grace in bird,overall lacking a lot.

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logomotive Oct. 05 '08

What I always try to do is imagine all of the type lumped into a solid mass and compare that to the the mark. I also take into consideration the negative areas of the type and your swan here is solid. It's all about ratio. if you where to reduce this logo for biz card size the type would nearly be gone.

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GabrielRO Oct. 06 '08

not like much the %22face%22, love the type

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maximalist Oct. 06 '08

so nice, so beautiful!

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ddayco Oct. 07 '08

I wouldn't add anything. I think it's the simplicity that makes it work. Any more detail would detract from the elegance of it. Nice job.

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waynepashley Oct. 09 '08

Like logomotive said, the proportions of the bird make it look dumpy and top-heavy. I also don't see the point in the line on the face/beak which wouldn't be visible when printed small.

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jasoncho Oct. 09 '08

okay , oh and the little line on the face... I don't know where it came from :(

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kokolynee Oct. 15 '08

This makes me feel lofty inside- gorgeous.

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tintation May. 06 '11

Clean Beautiful and Simple**Great Job :)

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