Oct. 02 '08
bird. a basic cover :)
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Everybody loves swans.
yeah i love the shape, great job jason cho!
This is a bit weak IMO.Type is too small,not enough grace in bird,overall lacking a lot.
What I always try to do is imagine all of the type lumped into a solid mass and compare that to the the mark. I also take into consideration the negative areas of the type and your swan here is solid. It's all about ratio. if you where to reduce this logo for biz card size the type would nearly be gone.
not like much the "face", love the type
so nice, so beautiful!
I wouldn't add anything. I think it's the simplicity that makes it work. Any more detail would detract from the elegance of it. Nice job.
Like logomotive said, the proportions of the bird make it look dumpy and top-heavy. I also don't see the point in the line on the face/beak which wouldn't be visible when printed small.
okay , oh and the little line on the face... I don't know where it came from :(
This makes me feel lofty inside- gorgeous.
Clean Beautiful and Simple
Great Job :)
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