NewLife Productions

by Imani_Lateef • Uploaded: Dec. 05 '08

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Description: Logo design for Mid-West production company
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Imani_Lateef Dec. 06 '08

comments. suggestions.

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sdijock Dec. 07 '08

Unfortunately, it reads as %22NEWL%22 %22FE%22, which is obviously not what you had intended. You may want to consider using a slightly lighter (thinner) weight for the word %22LIFE%22 and then make your star significantly larger and/or longer so that the thicker part of it matches the weight of the type more closely.

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THEArtistT Dec. 07 '08

One thing to add to sdijock is to put the original %22I%22 back in just to adjust the kerning then remove it. There is too much space around the down point of the star which removes it even more from representing the %22I%22 in LIFE. And, just a thought, I would move PRODUCTIONS over so that the tip of the down point takes the place of the %22I%22 in PRODUCTIONS as well. Should help reinforce what the star represents.

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Imani_Lateef Dec. 08 '08

thanks for all the feed back. I'll post a revised version*

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