Home

This works quite well. Have you considered curving larger type around the tin so it looks like part of the label?

I like this, but with firebrands idea will look even better!

this is a solid concept just needs better execution and better typo

thanks guys for your kind words and advice :)%0D*%0D*firebrand: thanks for the suggestion, i'll give it a try and update as soon as i can!%0D*%0D*DDD: i know there's lots of room for improvement, but i'm more than eager to learn, do you have any suggestions type-wise?

what a grand concept.

**updated with firebrand's feedback! better? worse? not at all what you had in mind? :P do tell!

logomotive said: %22what a grand concept%22.**Thanks man, it's thanks to you that I could ever come up with this, your work is one of the most inspirational ones I have been lucky enough to witness.**cheers!

Glad to be of inspiration. I think the type is a bit big? I actually thought the overall design prior to this had more impact? the Type tucked in the corner made me look at it and read it easy. I think I actually preferred the prior one myself. But Roy knows what he's talking about too.

Maybe post the other up so people can compare? I think this logo could work for a few things to do with Painting the city.

I like the caps and the curvature. Maybe smaller, bold condensed, ranged right as before.

Go back to the original type lockup and positioning but follow the curvature of the can.

I also agree that it needs some work, but like where its going. As an added thought why not make the paint a nice 'red' then it would give it another ahhhhh! factor. As in paint the city / town ... red.

ok third time's the charm!**thanks guys for all your feedback, I tried to incorporate all your suggestions into this one.**thoughts?**@NeilMcDonald: I'll upload the colored one in a minute :)**

almost :) I think it's almost there. Look at distance from bottom of can to type (black area and curvature ). also for some reason I want to drag it back to left a little more seems too close to border. Go same black area around the type.

damn! nothing gets past you :D**ok, i'll get back to work then!

better now?

Me gusta m%E1s la versi%F3n roja y blanca. Pero el concepto est%E1 buen%EDsimo!