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Personal Logo V.1

by Heath • Uploaded: Nov. 27 '11 - Gallerized: Nov. '11

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Description: I am starting a website and decided to make a logo for myself. I will hopefully put it on some print promotions soon once I get more content on the site so I want it polished. I am trying to reach out to my clients in a more personal way through the site.
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heath Nov. 28 '11

I may have selected the wrong option%2C because it says %22Not seeking critique%22 but I would love comments AND critique. Thanks to those that have already commented and liked this one.

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Type and Signs Nov. 29 '11

so you are seriously looking for critiques ... %3BD ... ok ... I would optimize the kerning of HE A TH ... and what is your name ... HEATH%2C HEATH CATES%2C HEATH CAT%2C or HEATH CAT.es %3F%3F ... all identical font except the Lobster %3F%3F%3F I think the readability of the Lobster isn't that good .... but that's only my opinion ... %3BD

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heath Nov. 29 '11

Thanks CD%2C I changed it. %0A%0AAlso%2C I have done a few changes but am going to refine it a bit more before I post a v3 since I posted a v2 and have some feedback from it to consider as well. %0A%0AAs far as my name%2C I think it is obvious in the design %28Heath Cates%29 but I agree heathcat.es is not the %231 choice. I owned heathcates.com a long time ago and the reg went out of business and I lost it. I haven't been able to get it back since. I have used heathcates.info%2C cateshome.com and heath.fm but I do like heathcat.es better than anything I've had since the .com. %0A%0AThank you all and keep the feedback coming%21

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herbyderby Dec. 02 '11

I like. A few things%3A%0A%0A1. Is the top arch of the ribbon a different degree of curve from the bottom curve%3F It looks like it. It should be the same if it isn't.%0A2. I personally avoid using religious references such as Bible verses. Not because I am against them %28I am Presbyterian%29%2C but because you may cut out a segment of your market out that may or may not appreciate it. Most clients really don't care much about your religious affiliation%2C they care about how good your product or business is and how that affects their bottom line.%0A3. If you keep the verse%2C make the top curve of the white %22badge%22 portion to be less severe. Not so round as to match the arch of the verse so they aren't so different.%0A4. Yep%3B learn kerning. The E-to-A and A-to-T need proper spacing.%0A5. Black%2C orange and white%3F If you're going for %22more personal%22 then think about other color combinations that aren't so masculine or construction company-ish.%0A%0AMy 2 cents.

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heath Dec. 12 '11

Thanks for the comments. I am thankfully very busy with some other work at the moment. Plan on taking this all in and working on it soon.

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