TEXAS NATIVE PLANT FARM
by HanleyCreative • Uploaded: Apr. 04 '09
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Plant farm cultivating plants native to Texas.
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Love the spin on the Texas star. I have two comments, which are fairly minor.*1.) I would reduce the size of the star plant slightly so that it doesn't touch the edges of the inner circle. It makes the flower feel confined - like it's trying to bust out of the circle, which makes it visually unsettling to the viewer. *2.) Fix your kerning. Type on a circle is always a little challenging as far as spacing goes. %22PLANT FARM%22 looks fine, but %22TEXAS%22 and %22NATIVE%22 need to be fixed. I would basically tighten up around the %22A%22 in both words.**Nice overall though.
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