Hanan Cafe

by HIDE • Uploaded: Oct. 30 '11

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Description: Coffee shop 可能であれば日本語でのご意見いただけると幸いです。
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chanpion Oct. 30 '11

I tried to paste Japanese text but it didn't work.**Anyway, what I was trying to say is that the design overall is very clever especially the use of negative space but I immediately see a toilet instead of a cup of beverage. Sorry!

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hide Oct. 31 '11

Thank you for your advise.*Yes, it looks like a toilet. I do not realize it.*I would like to revise it with your advise.

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chanpion Oct. 31 '11

I've been looking at this for awhile now trying to find a simple solution for you but its hard to alter one thing without destroying another. I see that the negative space image is pouring the froth onto a cappuccino and it would be hard to resize either one without compromising the thickness of the H strokes. If you make the mug smaller, the toilet would be even more obvious, so I guess try making the cup a little smaller and see what that looks like.**I apologize that I've put the toilet image in your head but that was what I saw straight off the bat. But other than that I think the concept is one of the best I've seen.**Fellow Logoponders, any thoughts?

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