On a date

by GopsokLa • Uploaded: Aug. 16 '11

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Tags: bond relationship relation heart
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qyper Aug. 17 '11

clever. like it.

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designtofeel Aug. 17 '11

I think your next step is too fix the typography. For this subject matter, the typeface seems very geometric and not %22friendly%22 enough. I would try a nice humanist sans serif like Myriad Pro (personal fave). Your kerning is funky too. Date reads like D AT E, and there's just too much space all throughout the type. It's coming along though!

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GopsokLa Aug. 18 '11

Thanks alot for the comment. I learned that I have to be careful with the spacing between the type too. Well, I will keep that in my mind.

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