Flywell Logo

by Flywell • Uploaded: Aug. 17 '07

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Description: Unfinished logo... looking for critique's
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flywell Aug. 17 '07

I can already see that I need a different font. The thin areas are getting lost. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!

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OcularInk Aug. 17 '07

I think this one has great potential!! I love the plane icon. Something about the angle of the plane feels slightly off though. I think it's the negative space under the tail wing. If the plane were rotated negative 30-35 degress with the right perspective applied, it might look a little better. What do you think? The font could be better too. All in all, it's looking good.

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flywell Aug. 17 '07

Thanks Ocular! I agree, and after some adjustments I'm hoping it looks even better. I plane to remake the plane... it's a little sloppy now, and I will try playing with the rotation. **Thanks Again!!

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Matheus Aug. 17 '07

thats a nice plane

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Jormi_Boced Aug. 21 '07

I agree on the font. A nice thick one woule be great.

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SpiffyJ Aug. 22 '07

The plane doesn't need as much work as the type does. I think the rounded corners on the plane don't mesh well with the pointy serifs of the type. Maybe slightly thicker type with more of a blund serif or maybe even sans serif.

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flywell Aug. 23 '07

Ok.... thanks! I appreciate the honesty, and it definitely helps. **I have tried several different fonts and still can't seem to find just the right one. I keep going back to these big serifs. I will post an update of the updated version.**Thanks again.... and keep it up!**.

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flywell Aug. 23 '07

I'm kinda new here.... so I wasn't sure if I should edit this one.... or post an new logo for the update. So I posted a new logo to show the update. I suppose that might be better as you will still be able to see the old one. So hey!!! Go look at the new version in my showcase!! Thanks!!

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themooncake Jan. 12 '10

I like this reversed version better than the one that has the white circle around. Without the white circle, it gives the freedom look to the logo.

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