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by FiebigDesigns. • Uploaded: Oct. 26 '11

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Add to Pad (In 3 Pad s )

Description: Just a play around to try and make a nice looking script logo. Still a work in progress, critiques are appreciated!
Status: Work in progress
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Fiebig Designs. Oct. 26 '11

I know that there is still a lot of work to be done on this before it looks right, but i'm just looking for some constructive criticism to help me out! Thanks in advance guys!

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type and signs Oct. 26 '11

nice lettering Mr. Fiebig ... what looks a bit strange is the hook on the F ... seems to me like a mixture between an F and a P ...

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robiro Oct. 26 '11

I would suggest making the top (horizontal) line of the r a little longer, just to make it more obvious.

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Fiebig designs. Oct. 26 '11

Hey thanks heaps for the comments! Yeah originally the hook of the 'F' was a little longer so it looked a lot more like a P so I reduced it a bit but I will change it more thankyou! The r has been bugging me i tried too fix it but wrecked the balance, I will give it another shot thanks!**

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