Human Resources

by EnGar • Uploaded: Aug. 06 '10

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Description: Human Resources: A sci-fi web comedy series. (Thanks to Nido for all the great feedback.)
Status: Client work
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Tags: office puppet series web
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engar Aug. 06 '10

Simplified ship and light n.n . Thoughts?

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Mikeymike Aug. 06 '10

I don't know if you need the darker oval at the bottom. It just seems a bit distracting. Just a thought. Cleaning up nicely.

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engar Aug. 06 '10

Thanks Mike you are probably right :)

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nido Aug. 06 '10

_I don't know if you need the darker oval at the bottom. It just seems a bit distracting. Just a thought. Cleaning up nicely._**exactly.

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nido Aug. 06 '10

maybe not even at the top?...

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engar Aug. 06 '10

Fixed. Using now a single shade of gray.

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nido Aug. 06 '10

dont even think you need the break at the bottom either... its not like it wont make sense without it...

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engar Aug. 06 '10

Ugh, I feel like a child, thanks man I really apreciate it. You have taught me a valuable lesson on simplicity I won't ever forget.

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engar Aug. 06 '10

Fixed kerning and removed slogan.

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engar Aug. 06 '10

Don't you like light gray? I find it delighful. Well, anyway, is just until client accepts concept, then I'll focus in colours.

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engar Aug. 06 '10

I really haven't worried about colours as for yet, it's still not time for it. Don't worry, they'll come.

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engar Aug. 06 '10

Got last fixes for the day, lightbeam was a bit off so I centered it regarding mark.**Thanks again everyone.

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JF Aug. 06 '10

I like the concept.**When you add color, tho, I suggest you keep the beam a light grey, other letters black, ship outline %5Bwhere it's currently grey%5D a shade of alien-like green. The 'A' could be fine as white, but black/charcoal could work as well. Also, kerning on 'resources' is a little too tight for my tastes, but it's not horrible. Nice work so far.

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engar Aug. 06 '10

Thank you JF I'll keep it in mind :)

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theartistt Aug. 06 '10

the kerning is too tight for me, but otherwise this is cool. weird, but cool.

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