Aug. 06 '10
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Human Resources: A sci-fi web comedy series. (Thanks to Nido for all the great feedback.)
Simplified ship and light n.n . Thoughts?
I don't know if you need the darker oval at the bottom. It just seems a bit distracting. Just a thought. Cleaning up nicely.
Thanks Mike you are probably right :)
_I don't know if you need the darker oval at the bottom. It just seems a bit distracting. Just a thought. Cleaning up nicely._**exactly.
maybe not even at the top?...
Fixed. Using now a single shade of gray.
dont even think you need the break at the bottom either... its not like it wont make sense without it...
Ugh, I feel like a child, thanks man I really apreciate it. You have taught me a valuable lesson on simplicity I won't ever forget.
Fixed kerning and removed slogan.
Don't you like light gray? I find it delighful. Well, anyway, is just until client accepts concept, then I'll focus in colours.
I really haven't worried about colours as for yet, it's still not time for it. Don't worry, they'll come.
Got last fixes for the day, lightbeam was a bit off so I centered it regarding mark.**Thanks again everyone.
I like the concept.**When you add color, tho, I suggest you keep the beam a light grey, other letters black, ship outline %5Bwhere it's currently grey%5D a shade of alien-like green. The 'A' could be fine as white, but black/charcoal could work as well. Also, kerning on 'resources' is a little too tight for my tastes, but it's not horrible. Nice work so far.
Thank you JF I'll keep it in mind :)
the kerning is too tight for me, but otherwise this is cool. weird, but cool.
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