Feb. 16 '10
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My Monarchy Hotel
Very clever idea with monogram symbol on this. I just dont like typography and coloring. Position and size of symbol should be better balenced with typo. Anyways symbol is strong enough.
I agree with janzabransky. The Trajan font is a bit too common. Maybe if you got something similar, but not that. Also, those stars look a bit childish, in relation to the typography. Maybe sharper stars, more acute angles..
I know the stars may look better when sharp, but it's more related to the symbol, which has rounded corners too. Just wanted to be consequent.*I think you're right with the typo. I tried to hold on to the crown idea too much, and unnecessary underlined it with the type. I'll do some reaarrangement and post an update. Thanks for you opinion!
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