I like the the mark alot (without dropshadow tho). I like the typo a bit too, but something seems off. What I would try is%3B remove the %22point club%22. But leave the dot from the %22i%22 where it is. But make it a bit bigger to almost the size it is in the mark (to draw attention to it). Then center the remaining text under it. I think that will convey the whole 24.5 thing alot better and in a more abstract way. Right now, you are saying it literally and it is throwing things off balance.**Well that is my .02. But I am a fan of the mark
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I like the the mark alot (without dropshadow tho). I like the typo a bit too, but something seems off. What I would try is%3B remove the %22point club%22. But leave the dot from the %22i%22 where it is. But make it a bit bigger to almost the size it is in the mark (to draw attention to it). Then center the remaining text under it. I think that will convey the whole 24.5 thing alot better and in a more abstract way. Right now, you are saying it literally and it is throwing things off balance.**Well that is my .02. But I am a fan of the mark
Reply@ddd: thanks so much!! i like where your advice is going.. i'm going to redo this with those changes.. i apprecaite the help!
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