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by DanShannon • Uploaded: Feb. 03 '11

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Description: For a company who specialise in corporate golf days
Status: Work in progress
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DanShannon Feb. 03 '11

Thanks. Yeah, I'm looking for critiques. Not too sure where to head with it.

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JF Feb. 03 '11

The thing I noticed is there are ...I know there's a name for the little craters, but I can't think of it... anyhow, the little craters/dots disappear unevenly into the circular border. I'd make them be half-way in the border at best%3B when shrunk to a small size, it just makes the circular line look jaggedy. Can't tell why unless you blow it up. It's just messy that way. Otherwise, lovely work so far.

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jurcek Feb. 03 '11

alot of potential..although it needs quite some more work..

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JF Feb. 03 '11

Hey, one more idea. Reduce the number of dots/little craters. That will help greatly with shrinkability.

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domographics Feb. 04 '11

Or even this… I'm sure there are better examples, these are just two from a quick Google search.**http://www.istockphoto.com/file_thumbview_approve/8961696/2/istockphoto_8961696-golf-ball.jpg

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