Mar. 11 '10
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peacock & gown
Very clever! Love the peacock head/dress mix. Good job!
Font needs work. Lovely dress. Would it make it too much to put white space between the necks? Keep it connected at the bottom. Would look like a split in the dress and give the peacocks a bit more definition. Just a thought. Mark lovely overall.
%5Eagree with theartistt - you could form the neckline of the dress %26 separate the peacocks heads slightly. Also maybe scallop the bottom hem of the dress like peacocks feathers are shaped when they flair out. It will add interest and perhaps tie the dress to the peacock. I love the direction you are going in!
thanks for the feedback, I had a version with the white space in middle - it did give the peacocks more definition but didn't look right. The problem I had with creating a neckline is that this client is renting gowns to a religious group and the gown has to be representing a modest/full cover gown. I will try adding the feathers at bottom to see what it does.
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