music

by Bmarley • Uploaded: Aug. 15 '11

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Description: music. (After fixing)
Status: Just for fun
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Bernd Aug. 15 '11

very cool concept ... very unique sign

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atomicvibe Aug. 15 '11

NICE. Honestly, I don't think you need those notes. The shape of the saxophone is enough to convey the idea of music.**I have a few nitpicky suggestions:**1) You might want to think about fixing the counter on your A. The distortion you put on the letter is causing this area to look a bit wonky.**2) I would fix the space between the dot/key above your K and its ascender - make it the same space as that of your I.**3) I would try extending the left arm of your Z a bit more so that it completely covers the U. The current break in that curve (between the M and the Z) looks a little awkward.**4) The left foot and the left apex of your M look very distorted, as do the dots over your K and I. They look like the bezier curves go the opposite direction. This is pretty awkward looking, and I would try to even out those curves.**You're very close with this one. It just needs a little polishing up. Great start!

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Bmarley Aug. 15 '11

Thank you for your comments that is really important to me. I will try to fix all mistakes.

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