The Mesh

by BernardKowalski • Uploaded: Jun. 26 '07

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Description: First concept for the rebrand of themesh.ca. The chess pawn element is a requirement. Constructive crits always appreciated.
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KGB Jun. 26 '07

I like it. I think the blue pawn could be a little stronger. Now, I only see the light green one and what seems like a ghost on top of it.

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OcularInk Jun. 26 '07

Loving those colors. Very nice, Bernard!

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Bernard Kowalski Jun. 27 '07

Thanks for the feedback guys. What about the typo? I'm not 100%25 stoked on it.**Also, the client has agreed to some concepts sans-pawn. More to come.

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KGB Jun. 27 '07

I think the type is fine. The only thing I see is that people may read it %22them%22 %22esh%22. Maybe a weight change. I think this face goes with the illustration style of the pawn(s). %22.ca%22 could be a bit larger. I can't see it reproducing well in smaller applications.

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senterbrands Jun. 28 '07

Im a sucker for overlays...but this one just seems to be missing something. I agree that .ca needs to be larger or it will get lost.

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