Sanaa

by Bahrouh • Uploaded: Jul. 18 '08

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THEArtistT Oct. 01 '08

This is really pretty, but the top part of the swan S is a lot heavier than the bottom part giving it a vague feeling of tipping forward to the right. Not that that is a terrible thing, but it would feel more balanced with just a little more weight added to the bottom. I'm not keen on the small caps either. The larger S adds to the effect of the swan S falling forward. I like your style of design, however. All of your work very good.

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